Write with Music Festival

Masterclass Title: The Soul of the Sentence: A Guide to Rewriting and Editing Facilitator: Chinoso Nzeh Date: 14 th November 2026 Time: 2pm- 4pm Venue: Bloomgrey Event Centre, Gbagada, Lagos What You Will Learn ·          Diagnose why a sentence feels unclear, wordy, awkward, vague, or flat. ·          Rewrite sentences for stronger clarity, flow, rhythm, emphasis, and voice. ·          Choose more precise verbs and nouns, and remove filler or repetition. ·          Vary sentence length and structure without making prose confusing. ·          Improve transitions and logical connections between sentences and paragraphs. ·          Distinguish revision (rethinking meaning and organization) from editing and proofreading (cor...